Transformers Mosaic: "Irresistible Force"

I appreciate the effort, but IMHO: Mosaic = one-shot vignette... and not a serial.

The internal updates, Motormaster's dialog, the fight and the art style itself are all very Frank Miller circa DKR or possible even 300. It just lacks the rawness of the originals and is left seeming cheap. I did like it though and want to see more. But a more natural style would've worked better.

wow, finally something with Guiltar niceee

Ehhhhh... story and art fall a little short for me.

letterer should have bolded "FAKER" as a nod to the MOTU character that was an evil He-Man/Skeletor hybrid.

Iv'e been looking for a proper place to ask this question.
Who is Guiltor anyway? Were did he come from? What is he exactly?

Hehe I like the "don't mean diddly", It's Ned Flanders. Always was a fan of Motormaster

hurts my eyes. wont stick around to read if the art does not hold my interest

craggy wrote:letterer should have bolded "FAKER" as a nod to the MOTU character that was an evil He-Man/Skeletor hybrid.

That line was never intended to be a nod to Faker. Which is sad, because I wish I could say it was. Still, maybe my subconsious was at work.

BeastProwl wrote:Iv'e been looking for a proper place to ask this question.
Who is Guiltor anyway? Were did he come from? What is he exactly?

Guiltor is a one-shot character from a Japanese Manga published in 1986: http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Guiltor

A link to the translated Manga can be found at the bottom of the page. He's official, but never did anything else.

Doubledealer93 wrote:wow, finally something with Guiltar niceee

Though it is nice to see he has other fans besides me .

zodconvoy wrote:The internal updates, Motormaster's dialog, the fight and the art style itself are all very Frank Miller circa DKR or possible even 300. It just lacks the rawness of the originals and is left seeming cheap. I did like it though and want to see more. But a more natural style would've worked better.

I've never read either of those(but I have seen 300). Still, I'm a fan of Linkara and Atop the Fourth Wall, so it's very possible that influenced how I wrote the piece.

So is this by that same team that did the other Guiltor mosaic that involved the Quint who created him?

Bumblevivisector wrote:So is this by that same team that did the other Guiltor mosaic that involved the Quint who created him?

Yep, it's a sequal. Notice he no longer wears a faction symbol.

However, those Quints in the other one weren't necessarily the ones who created him.

I do like this. However, once again I find myself wishing for third party trailer armour for Nemesis Prime to make him Motormaster.

Windsweeper wrote:I do like this. However, once again I find myself wishing for third party trailer armour for Nemesis Prime to make him Motormaster.

If you go to the site and click on the ideas button you can send fansproject an e-mail about anything you want them to do. Cilck the link here: http://www.fansproject.com/?page_id=28