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LAST BOT STANDING

Story by;
Joe Khachadourian http://joe-kach.deviantart.com/
&
Geoff Deen

Script, Art & Letters by;
Joe Khachadourian http://joe-kach.deviantart.com/

Colors by;
Javier “Shinobi Rendar” Reyes http://shinobirendar.deviantart.com/

Edits by;
Sommer Harvey

[Sabrblade]

Sureshot is BEAST in this one. But I'd prefer Pointblank instead, since he is the leader of the Targetmaster Autobots.

[Unicron Singularity]

Isn't that Sureshot? Can't be Crosshairs, as he says "Sureshot" about himself.

[Sledge]

And he's clearly drawn as Sureshot, what with being yellow and all.

[Scantron]

Neat story, but a couple of critiques that took me out of it:

- Panel transition is a bit confusing for me. The first panel seems to be leading into the top panel discussing Hun-Grr, then Sureshot changes topics to the 'liberation', then back to Hun-Grr. The panel where Sureshot thinks about the 'liberation' seems like it should come right in the middle of his train of thought in the first panel, right before he names the Terrorcons.

- Sureshot's poses in the last two panels are modified versions of Catilla and Fastlane (respectively) from the DW G1 MTMTE guidebooks. The details have been changed to make the character Sureshot, but the poses are too close for it to be a coincidence, IMO. I also notice that the details on Sureshot's upper left thigh in one panel disappear in the other, he doesn't really look like he's holding his gun in the 'Catilla' panel (like it's just drawn over his hand) and Sureshot only seems to have 'vents' on his upper left arm but not the right arm.