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News Credits: 156 · by **WhiteRabbit** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:36 pm

The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:

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News Credits: 1082 · by **Tigertrack** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:05 pm

Pretty undetailed in all regards. Just kind of is...

News Credits: 2 · by **sabrigami** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:12 pm

Wow..I don't mean to be insulting to the author or anything but there isn't much happening in this one is there :???:

News Credits: 8 · by **Flashwave** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:26 pm

I'll give him credit, the joke on Armada's behalf (did G1 do it too maybe? Not likely though) but it's too much build up and not much of a one-liner. Still better than I can do though, and good effort.

News Credits: 8 · by **Megatron Wolf** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:32 pm

A for effort C for execution, i can see what the author was trying to do and its a good idea but it wasnt done right. Seems like a rush job to me.

http://www.youtube.com/user/Slayershoop · by **Slayershoop** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:21 pm

I don't mean to hate on this or anything, but this is the first one in a long time that I haven't liked. He just doesn't do much in the comic and the joke is kinda poorly executed... :-(

Good effort though

by **zenosaurus_x** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:06 pm

Seems sort of....empty...

News Credits: 9 · by **Editor** » Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:20 pm

I actually liked the simplicity of this one, and got the armada reference (it that was intended) but i do feel it is lacking some substance.

News Credits: 3 · by **ArmadaPrime** » Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:04 am

It might've worked better if it was the armada one as he actually did go on to do that...
Still, not too bad

by **Windsweeper** » Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:15 pm

Don't know why but I like it. Teaming up with the Autobots probably would have been his best idea.

by **Predaprince** » Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:40 pm

I think it would have worked better if each panel had a screenshot of action rather than him standing around by himself.

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:06 am

It's ok, and I agree with most of what the others are saying, it needs something more added to it, to make it a bit 'punchier'. Like Panel 4, Starscream needs a more 'excited' look on his face, and then the last panel, needs to be broken up into two like the others, and maybe a final panel with something more interesting on it...

I took the original, and reworked it into something a bit more extravagant, hope the creator doesn't mind...
:oops:

EDIT:- Having done all that, I still think it needs something else. Oh well! I tried!

by **Predaprince** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:43 am

That's better gigazarak. How about two more panels at the end. The next one showing all the male clones fighting and bickering and the female one on the side shaking her head and then the last panel with Starscream looking crushed from failure.

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:39 pm

Predaprince wrote:That's better gigazarak. How about two more panels at the end. The next one showing all the male clones fighting and bickering and the female one on the side shaking her head and then the last panel with Starscream looking crushed from failure.

Great idea! I'll see what I can do!

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:33 am

gigazarak wrote:
Predaprince wrote:That's better gigazarak. How about two more panels at the end. The next one showing all the male clones fighting and bickering and the female one on the side shaking her head and then the last panel with Starscream looking crushed from failure.

Great idea! I'll see what I can do!

It's been a while, is anyone out there?

Oh well, I worked on it a bit more, I took Predaprinces suggestion, and added some more to it...

I made a blog post kinda showing the process from original to my final version... check it out if you're curious...

http://www.gigazarak.com/blog/?p=276

by **zenosaurus_x** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:48 am

Hehe, I like it!
Especially how you executed it, one big panel.
Plus, "I need a better plan" tied it in well.

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:10 am

zenosaurus_x wrote:Hehe, I like it!
Especially how you executed it, one big panel.
Plus, "I need a better plan" tied it in well.

Thanks! I tried to make it worthwhile!

I also tried to get it to be an "official" Mosaic, as I think it stands on its own, but I got knocked back! Bummer! It's my first attempt at something like this, so I think I'll try for something original next time!

Glad you liked it!

Also, I'm not allowed to use the TFM heading at the top, because it's not official. oh well...

by **Predaprince** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 3:41 am

gigazarak wrote:
zenosaurus_x wrote:Hehe, I like it!
Especially how you executed it, one big panel.
Plus, "I need a better plan" tied it in well.

Thanks! I tried to make it worthwhile!

I also tried to get it to be an "official" Mosaic, as I think it stands on its own, but I got knocked back! Bummer! It's my first attempt at something like this, so I think I'll try for something original next time!

Glad you liked it!

Also, I'm not allowed to use the TFM heading at the top, because it's not official. oh well...

That's just wrong that they aren't going to make it an official mosaic. This is a million times better than the original! Superb work!

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:49 am

Predaprince wrote:
gigazarak wrote:
zenosaurus_x wrote:Hehe, I like it!
Especially how you executed it, one big panel.
Plus, "I need a better plan" tied it in well.

Thanks! I tried to make it worthwhile!

I also tried to get it to be an "official" Mosaic, as I think it stands on its own, but I got knocked back! Bummer! It's my first attempt at something like this, so I think I'll try for something original next time!

Glad you liked it!

Also, I'm not allowed to use the TFM heading at the top, because it's not official. oh well...

That's just wrong that they aren't going to make it an official mosaic. This is a million times better than the original! Superb work!

Thanks, that means a lot to hear that. It kinda hurt to get knocked back like that. Still, I realise that they have rules, and while I don't think I violated anything, I still used their logo without permission, so here's an update...

I have updated my blog post with the updated details of this saga, if you are curious, you can check it out here...

Gigazarak presents… Starscreams Master Plan

News Credits: 3 · by **ArmadaPrime** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:08 am

that is an awesome mosaic... err not mosaic.
You really should try and get some more done and accepted by them!!!

News Credits: 1 · by **gigazarak** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:09 pm

ArmadaPrime wrote::lol: that is an awesome mosaic... err not mosaic.
You really should try and get some more done and accepted by them!!!

Thanks! It evolved into something good, I'm proud of it, thanks for the compliment!

I want to work on some more, I've got my taste for it now, stay tuned, who knows what's in store! (hopefully it gets accepted!)